motivation letter

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motivation letter

My interest in business education stems from years ago when my father as a businessman let me play a role in his decision-making process.

I have been working during my studying years, I have managed a team in Research and Development Department at a well-known company in Iran called Pars Data and currently I’m the Marketing supervisor at Asanegar Company. In addition, I have involved in two human resources projects (TMS that stands for talent management system and standardization) for Khoshgavar Company which is the agency of Coca-Cola in Iran.

I have also a strong academic background. As a top student in bachelor degree I had the chance to continue my education in master degree with exemption from taking an entrance exam; so I had a opportunity to follow my dream and now I’m about to graduate with a Master's degree in Business Administration from PNU University in Tehran.

Furthermore due to my interest in new controversial management topics, as a consequence I wrote two articles about neuromarketing and e-commerce. Beside that I formulated a strategic plan for Asanegar which boosted up their performance. Working as a software architecture made me to think in creative way, analyze applications and consider any possibilities.

I suppose that I could be a valuable asset. After reviewing my CV, I hope that you realize that I am well qualified so I look forward to discussing my qualifications by email at miss.pahlevani[at]gmail[dot]com .

Thank you so much for your time.

Best,
Sahar Pahlevani

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My interest in business education stems from years ago
My interest in business education stemmed from years ago

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It is too simple. More content wanted.

and more compound or complex sentences wanted.

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