david xie

About me

Hi,

I am working on IETLS writing part, any advice is welcome

I am from

Australia

Goal

I am looking for a teacher/tutor

Gender

Male

Level

Intermediate

Member for

10 years 1 month

My essays:

• Today many young people are moving from rural areas to cities Why is this Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 74
• Some people find history a fascinating subject Others say it is dull and has no value in modern life Discuss both views and give your own opinion 85
• There are more advantages to studying abroad than disadvantages.To what extent do you agree with this statement? 65
• The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population, This is causing problems not only for poor, undeveloped countries, but also for industrialised and developing nations.Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at lea 60
• Nowadays, children and teenager play more and more computer games. Parents think computer games have little value and more harmful effects. What's opinion? 80
• Some people say that government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily? Do you agree or disagree? 80
• Nowadays pollution and waste levels are increasing rapidly How does this effect ordinary people What steps can be taken to overcome this problem 76
• Some people feel that certain workers like nurses doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of t 55
• As mass communication and transport continue to grow societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalisation Some people fear that globalisation will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity To what extent d 78
• Some people feel that TV advertisements do not server a useful purpose. What is your opinion? 43

My speaking:

• (MY SAMPLE ANSWER)Describe something you did that you are proud ofyou should saywhat it waswhen you didhow it made you feelyou should also say what effect this achievement had on your life 75
• Describe an indoor game that you enjoy playing in your free time. Please say- What game is it?- How did you learn to play it?- Where do you usually play it? 90
• Describe a person whom you've lived with. You should say who this person is, why do you live with this person and how do you feel about this person. 70
• PART 2: Describe an open-air or street market which you enjoyed visiting. You should say: where the market is, what the market sells, how big the market, and explain why you enjoyed visiting this market. 66
• Talk about a prize that you would like to win. Please say- What is the prize?- What do you need to do to win it?- How would you feel after winning? 80
• Some Useful Advice that You ReceivedDescribe a situation (or time) when you received some useful advice.1. what the situation was2.who gave you the advice3.what the advice was4.and explain how this advice was useful to you. 70