do you agree or dis agree with the following statement " television has destroyed communication among friends and family". use specific reasons and examples of it.
Nowadays, many people and psychologists argue about negative effects of technology represented in televisions, internet and cell phones. One of theses unacceptable impacts would be the absence of family warmth or lack of good communication chances among its members. However, through my own experience, I think that television invention seems one of the best ways to achieve strong social relationships.
First of all, after long day in work all the family will come together at home. Having their dinner together and talking about their day activities and experiences. After that, let us imagine t...
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Category: Excellent Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 389 350
No. of Characters: 1938 1500
No. of Different Words: 229 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.441 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.982 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 101 80
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
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