You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart shows the monthly spending in dollars of a family in the USA on three items in 2010.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the monthly expenditures on food, gas and clothing of a household in the USA in 2010. Overall what stands out from the chart is that the amount of spendings fluctuated in the given year as mentioned in the question.
To begin, the most money was spent on food in January at around $ 500. Even though the rate of expenditure increased gradually in the following month, there was a significant drop to approximately $ 300, which constituted the least spending among all other items for the month of April.
With regard to gas, it showed an opposite trend compared to food. Having remained fluctuated for first three months, the final month witnessed a marked rise to just under $ 600 as opposed to nearly $ 350 at the beginning of a month. Now, turning to clothing, it began at just over $ 200, making it the lowest expenditure in January. However, in the following month, the family spent the same amount as the gas around $ 550 that was more than double of the investment of a starting month. But, the figure fell considerably in March followed by a sharp rise in the final month to about 650 dollars.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
spent the same amount as the gas around $ 550
spent the same amount as the food around $550
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 197 200
No. of Characters: 896 1000
No. of Different Words: 118 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.746 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.548 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.566 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 54 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 37 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 29 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.887 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.391 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.586 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.03 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$500'.
Suggestion: $500
... was spent on food in January at around $ 500. Even though the rate of expenditure in...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$300'.
Suggestion: $300
...was a significant drop to approximately $ 300, which constituted the least spending a...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$600'.
Suggestion: $600
...h witnessed a marked rise to just under $ 600 as opposed to nearly $ 350 at the begin...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$350'.
Suggestion: $350
...o just under $ 600 as opposed to nearly $ 350 at the beginning of a month. Now, turni...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$200'.
Suggestion: $200
...ning to clothing, it began at just over $ 200, making it the lowest expenditure in Ja...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$550'.
Suggestion: $550
...spent the same amount as the gas around $ 550 that was more than double of the invest...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72588832487 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63390681628 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629441624365 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2362795514 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.444444444 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161138860617 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628751495556 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430921999074 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113022768914 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036412550474 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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