People Believe that They Should be Able to keep all the Money They Earn and Should not Pay Tax to The State. To What Extent do You Agree or Disagree?

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People Believe that They Should be Able to keep all the Money They Earn and Should not Pay Tax to The State. To What Extent do You Agree or Disagree?

It is true that people can save all salary for themselves, since people need it for live. While I accept that it is maybe true, I believe that the other people who give part of their salary to government have good reasons too.

People who choose to keep all income, believe that they can avoid pay tax to the State. They believe that nowadays people need so many things to buy, and usually it is complicated to live well. The prices are keep raising, and the salary often can not cover all of the desire to buy everything. Then, some people who have family, have excuses to not pay the tax too. They need to use all of the money for their family, such as pay the children education, hospital, insurance, home, and unexpected occasion since family has some members. The other people who think they should not pay tax to the state, mention to save the money for retirement, nursing care, and make deposit to the bank. There is no guarantee from the government that at their elderly age, they still can live well, and that is better to prepared it since now.

On the other hand, some people think that as a good citizen, it is good to pay the tax to the State. They believe that government has already provided the facilities, such as the roads, public spaces and served them right, and they use the facilities, so it is a right thing to pay the tax. Then, some people assume that, since people like to live comfortably, they will be glad to live at good country to support it. They will need modern and upgraded facilities, and they have to help the government to develop the country’s infrastructures. Modern country with advanced facilities, need development for it, and usually the big countries have good rules for their citizens to pay the tax to develop their countries. The other people, also, feel the necessity to pay the tax to the State. They want to support the State to help orphans and elderly, who does not has any family, to live well. Orphans and elderly have to be taken care by the state, and it will be provided by the tax, so the people believe that they should pay to government.

In conclusion, both of them are still debatable and I believe that to save all income or give some of that to pay the tax, it depends on people’s decisions since money is a sensitive thing and affect people’s life.

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Sentence: Then, some people who have family, have excuses to not pay the tax too.
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Sentence: There is no guarantee from the government that at their elderly age, they still can live well, and that is better to prepared it since now.
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Suggestion: Refer to to and prepared

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