The two maps below show an island, before and after the contruction of some tourist facilities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps below show an island, before and after the contruction of some tourist facilities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps representing the development in an island show that it became a resort as many new infrastructure were built.

As can be seen from the maps, the area in the east of the island remained the same while the other parts underwent dramatic changes. A prier was added in the south for the boats to dock. This was likely to lead to other constructions, one of which was the reception house located in the centre of the innovated area. In addition, there was a new restaurant, linked with the reception by vehicle track. Besides this, ...

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Sentence: The two maps representing the development in an island show that it became a resort as many new infrustructures were built.
Error: infrustructures Suggestion: infrastructure

Sentence: Besides this, the two areas adjacent to the reception became places of accomodation as a number of cottages were constructed as well as the footpath between them.
Error: accomodation Suggestion: accommodation

Sentence: Lastly, the beach to the west of the island served as a swimming area after the contruction.
Error: contruction Suggestion: construction

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