The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph ilustrates the global consumption of water by a small number of sector during 1900 to 2000, and the table shows water use in two varying place. Both are measured by volume. Overall, it can be seen that all division increased, and the most water needs in Brazil than Democratic Republic of Congo.
In 1990, the number of volume in Agriculture stood at more high than two other sector. However, over the following 40 years, the Agriculture field increase gradually at 1000 km3, while other field still remaind more or less stable. During 1940 to 2000, there was a increase significantly of all parts, Agriculture was most highly, Industrial sector was there times as high as Domestic rates.
The number of population in Brazil at 176 million and irrigated land 26.500 km2 greater in number than Democratic Republic of Congo which is total of population at 5.2 million and irrigated areas just 100 km2. Interestingly, the water needs per person in Brazil being in larger number at 359 m3 and Congo was low amount at 8 m3 measured by per person.
a small number of sector
a small number of sectors
in two varying place.
in two varying places.
and the most water needs in Brazil than Democratic Republic of Congo.
and the water needs more in Brazil than that in Democratic Republic of Congo.
more high than two other sector.
higher than other two sectors.
the Agriculture field increase gradually
the Agriculture field increased gradually
Sentence: The number of population in Brazil at 176 million and irrigated land 26.500 km2 greater in number than Democratic Republic of Congo which is total of population at 5.2 million and irrigated areas just 100 km2.
Description: what is the verb for this sentence? can you re-write this sentence?
Sentence: The line graph ilustrates the global consumption of water by a small number of sector during 1900 to 2000, and the table shows water use in two varying place.
Error: ilustrates Suggestion: illustrates
Sentence: However, over the following 40 years, the Agriculture field increase gradually at 1000 km3, while other field still remaind more or less stable.
Error: remaind Suggestion: remain
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 183 200
No. of Characters: 853 1000
No. of Different Words: 107 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.678 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.661 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.495 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 55 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 32 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.71 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.125 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.413 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.634 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.047 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4