Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
It is a tragedy that criminals continue perpetrating crimes after getting punished by the authorities. Although there are some reasons behind that, some steps could be implemented in order to overcome this issue.
There are some causes for re-committing crimes. First of all, offenders do not have any skills and are uneducated. Also, they have criminal records which undermine their reputations and nobody trusts them. As a result, that would be extremely difficult for the convicted felons to get hired in a company. In doing so, as the last resort, the offenders perpetuate criminal activities in order to make a living. Moreover, the convicts make a society for themselves in the jail and establish rapports with each other. So, in some cases they exchange information and plan for a crime in the future.
Nevertheless, some measure could be taken to address this problem. First and foremost, the government had better train inmates and help them acquire skills and abilities. Also, launching community service is a step up the rehabilitation ladder and it boosts felons’ confidence. Also, some psychologists should be hired to give the felons counselling for a healthy life in the future. Consequently, if the governments cared about the aforementioned points, the criminals would be equipped with the prerequisites for a new healthy life after the jail sentence.
In conclusion, recidivism is one of the problems in many societies. However, the authorities can not only figure out the reasons behind that but also they can take remedies to resolve this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...an take remedies to resolve this issue.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25396825397 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99440984166 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599206349206 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6006992922 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.75 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197747373277 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630741822892 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065743385793 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121845618105 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320731350739 0.056905535591 56% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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