In some countries, the criminal trials are shown on TV and the general public can watch them. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantage?
nowadays, it is clearly seen that many criminal judgements are published on social media, especially on TV, which catch huge attention from the people. from my perspective, the benefits of this trend override the drawbacks.
On the one hand, the court process showing on tv may cause some drawbacks for the government as well as the prisoners. It is true that the criminals have to take the responsibility for the crimes but many people argue that the governments have no right to take people’s life, even though they committed a felony. In further conflict, there will be a gap between the governments and the residents, thus the government will soon gain no supports. What is more, the prisoners are likely to be given bad image whether their criminal commitments are not so serious, this will cause them hardly to adapt back with the community.
Although the negativeness are considerable, the positiveness are likely to override by some remarkable reasons. Admittedly, by judging the criminals on social media, the government can show off the political power to the citizens, the people will be afraid of carrying out a crime so that the crime rate would be reduced. This possitive change will lead people to a peaceful life. More importantly, in many countries, the justice are likely to be break by the interruption of money, the some unfair judgements are given. As the pedestrians can following the criminal trail on tv, every punishment will be based on laws and no more cheating, this may help the governments gain more trust from the people as well as supporting totally.
In conclusion, despite there will be some disagreements from the people, this trend still benefit both the society and the government, which will help the country to accelerate the development of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05016722408 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88056377769 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1785409674 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.833333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107079356769 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419111534316 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293231599549 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631199961189 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278436043518 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.