Schools (universities, colleges and high schools) should teach students about specific careers and jobs instead of general subjects.
Schools, a source of various aspects of knowledge, often equip the students with easy access to a tremendous sea of subjects and courses. Students in high school are required to master the general subjects in order to pass the examination which determines the universities and colleges where they can begin their further study. However, in the universities or colleges, students still need to have those general subjects. Personally speaking, universities are supposed to revise the curriculum so as to teach students more specific careers and jobs.
To begin with, students, after all, need to see...
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