Statement of purpose

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Statement of purpose

Sustainability, in all spheres, is the key concept to my professional intellectuality. Be it social, economical or cultural. Through my perception of architecture, I have realized the extent of my responsibility towards the physical environment as an Architect. The realization that architecture and city planning cannot develop in isolation accentuated my interest in the ‘physical dimensions of the city’ and the attempt to penetrate the mysteries of the urban tissue. Coming from a developing country like India, I comprehend the importance of urban planning more in terms of feasible aspects ...

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Score: 6.0 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 38 15
No. of Words: 801 350
No. of Characters: 4392 1500
No. of Different Words: 395 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.32 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.483 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.24 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 368 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 300 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 227 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 147 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.079 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.396 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.421 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.274 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.484 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.084 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 10 5

the whole thing has been written nicely and does not have significant grammatical or spelling errors. But i think it is a bit long and inundated with details from your work experience which do not really need to be there. :) wish you luck.