Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Controversies raise regarding whether the government should invest money on rail systems instead of roads. Factually, either rail networks and streets are important, as both support the development of one country’s economics, so I completely disagree with the idea above.
On the one hand, rail networks can be an effective delivery system while also be an essential transport for long distance travel in many countries. For example, in Vietnam, trains are used to carried both goods and passengers from the North to the South of the country and reverse. It is believed to have an affordable cost and can transfer more people and cargoes than other transportation such as truck or plane. Besides, in terms of long distances travel and shipping, the railways are safer and faster compared to the road systems, as there are neither traffic jam nor other vehicles on the track, which means the accident ratio is respectively low, and the shipping delay will likely not happen. Due to its effectiveness in cargo shipping and travelling over long distance, it is necessary for authorities to distribute resources on rail networks in order to ensure the smooth transportation, thus, contributing to the economy.
On the other hand, for daily commute, most citizen will prefer the roads. It is not hard to see people go to work or to school using different mode of transport, such as cars, bikes or bus. In fact, some governments even encourage their citizens to utilize public vehicles like bus or environmental-friendly one like bikes for commuting, as they aim to reduce the number of vehicles on the road, thus avoiding traffic jam. However, the most effective strategy at some countries, including Vietnam is to allocate funds for road upgrading. This involves broaden, periodically maintenance and repair the road. Therefore, spending money on road is also required to maximize inhabitant daily commute, which directly affect the overall movement of the society and the economy.
To summarize, I fully disagree with the given idea, as from my perspective, both roads and railways play critical roles in our lives and the national economic development. Therefore, governments should allocate money evenly to both systems to maintain their effective instead of priority one over another.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...elopment of one country’s economics, so I completely disagree with the idea above...
^
Line 2, column 539, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[5]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'there are neither traffics'?
Suggestion: there are neither traffics
...faster compared to the road systems, as there are neither traffic jam nor other vehicles on the track, wh...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ociety and the economy. To summarize, I fully disagree with the given idea, as ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24523160763 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94438849936 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58310626703 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9499400824 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.333333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4666666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153347340751 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508492277701 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455114141403 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103983884594 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478704140625 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...elopment of one country’s economics, so I completely disagree with the idea above...
^
Line 2, column 539, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[5]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'there are neither traffics'?
Suggestion: there are neither traffics
...faster compared to the road systems, as there are neither traffic jam nor other vehicles on the track, wh...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ociety and the economy. To summarize, I fully disagree with the given idea, as ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24523160763 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94438849936 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58310626703 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9499400824 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.333333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4666666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153347340751 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508492277701 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455114141403 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103983884594 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478704140625 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.