Is it better for students to study from home rather than go to school? Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is said that home study is better than studying at school. I disagree with this point of view to some extent.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people believe that it is better for their children to study at home. The most important point is that studying from home makes children more flexible and independent, as they can have their own schedule according to their ability and do not need to be committed to time and rules imposed by school officials. Also, they can have enough time in a day to do some extra homework to improve their skills in their academic courses. In addition to this, studying at home can be more cost-effective for parents because they do not need to spend a lot of money on transportation and other facilities required at school, such as junk food expenditure, which can also be unhealthy.
Despite the benefits mentioned above, I believe that there are some disadvantages to home study. Distractions are often a major threat to productivity when studying at home. Family members, friends, and relatives may intentionally or unintentionally not let children concentrate on their studies. Even if children are isolated from them, their noise can pose a problem. Additionally, it can be difficult for schoolchildren to focus on writing their tasks, listening to lectures, and reading their books when they are conscious of the TV program being watched by their parents. Moreover, we have to consider that all humans need to have a special structure for their activities to thrive. While studying at home provides freedom for students, it easily encourages procrastination. According to my experience, when there are no strict rules defined for children to study, they may find it difficult to become organized and disciplined. This situation can become worse when they lose their motivation to study and become introverted, as they are confined to the closed space of home and do not have any connections with their peers.
In conclusion, in my view, the disadvantages of home study outweigh its advantages, and it is better for students to study at school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... Despite the benefits mentioned above, I believe that there are some disadvantag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00284900285 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97605315735 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3521995696 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259292481102 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106096764448 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882658141563 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235960296873 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921935478531 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.