People today find their lives more and more dominated by their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is said that nowadays the life of many individuals is surrounded by their jobs. I agree with statement.
Nowadays, the cost of living is rapidly growing, and most people have no choice but to work hard to meet their needs. They have to earn a lot of money to cover their expenses, including renting the house, utility bills, school enrolment of children and other important requirements. As a result, it is natural that people are forced to work full time. In my experience, sometimes for some people office extends into the home, and they have no time to spend with their family, however they need to avoid to generously spend money and try to have more savings. Additionally, most of the time in families with children, the income of one partner is not enough, and both parents have to work either at home or out of home.
We can see that another reason that can make people workaholic, and their job can dominate their lives is that they may experience insufficiently reliable relationships in their families or they are in condition that love is conditioned on performance. Work may become a compensatory mechanism to help balance emotions, replace uncomfortable feelings, and achieve a sense of a fulfilling life. Sometimes, some people can only find the social respect that they need in their workplace therefore it is understandable that they prefer to engage themselves with work instead of spending time with their family members.
In conclusion, in my view, many people are dependent on their work and sometimes they become addicted to it, and this situation is created by several reasons as I mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 341, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... natural that people are forced to work full time. In my experience, sometimes for some p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93090909091 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79606334834 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567272727273 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1118511275 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.272727273 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264038787603 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107059086484 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758554029873 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160658888952 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403141439453 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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