Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The presence of capital punishment is a challenging discussion among the psychologist, social experts and law scholars. While some psychologists strongly repudiate the presence of capital punishment, the law scholars emphasize the importance of death penalty as a preventive strategy. Moreover, the interpretation of social experts is interesting that the fulfillment of capital punishment require the the understanding of people and society conditions. To elaborate more on this subject, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, the presence of the capital punishment has one main advantage. Based on the law experts opinion, it is a preventive strategy and if a person in a society commit a crime deserving a death penalty, the implementation of capital punishment, reflects a significant notice for other members to prevent it. For instance, in many counteries, murdering and human killing deserve death penalty and without this type of punishment, the rate of murdering crime might increase remarkably. As a result, the capital punishment controls the commitment to laws in society.
In contrast to above opinion, the psychologists believe that capital punishment is not preventive strategy to stop the crime and prevent people from breaking laws. They emphasize on this fact that lots of people have been recognized guilty in court of law and sentenced to the capital punishment that there were not sufficient proof for their crime. The implementation of the death penalty led to negative effects in those countries and jeopardize the foundation of the government. In addition, to establish the preventive strategy, before executing the capital punishment, the origin of the crime should be studied and even for murdering, the death penalty might not be an appropriate rule.
To recapitulate, the implementation of capital punishment has positive and negative aspects. While the preventive strategy is considered as a positive impact, on the other hand, the negative consequences in society member cannot be neglected. To my best knowledge, I believe the implementation of capital punishment require a vast social studies and it cannot prescribed for all countries. The level of wealth, education, and culture are critical factors effecting the executing capital punishment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, in contrast, as a result, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 8.3376753507 336% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59943181818 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21947957711 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477272727273 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 15.0 2.52805611222 593% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3293072278 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.1875 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25535959327 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859316688251 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475156969779 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162489748386 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479434794867 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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