Some people believe that your personality doesn t change over time To what extent do you agree with this opinion

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“Some people believe that your personality doesn’t change over time. To what extent do you agree with this opinion.”

Submitted by qaptpa on Sun, 12/22/2024 - 04:24

It is believed that a person can not change his/her manner no matter what. Although this opinion can be true to some extent, I am one of the opposite that human personality is changeable.
First and foremost, it is true that some people keep their characteristics from their childhood throughout their lives. According to studies, a newborn who receives much love and care from family would have an optimistic attitude toward every confrontation. This is due to the fact that childhood memories usually attach to children’s subconscious areas and shape their behaviors in the future. For instance, a child with parents working in academic careers tends to follow the parents’ steps and is likely to become a teacher, a researcher, or a scientist.
Despite the aforementioned fact, it is worth considering that one’s personality is not permanently consistent. Although childhood influences an individual’s future perception, adulthood environment has the same impact. In fact, there are many cases where an adult is influenced by other colleagues and friends. To illustrate, a prestigious family in Japan was allured by one criminal and completely changed their characteristic. They hurt each other to please the criminal.
In conclusion, I believe that people can change their way of manner over time.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...his opinion can be true to some extent, I am one of the opposite that human perso...
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Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...o please the criminal. In conclusion, I believe that people can change their wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38834951456 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17187972676 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660194174757 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0281010627 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204539884948 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685227798413 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083154671854 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149931524139 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104508113873 0.056905535591 184% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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