Some people think studying in groups is better, while some think self study is better for school students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
approaches to education can vary depending on social conditions and traditions. while many people prefer self-study, or individual pursuit, another indispensable, long-lasting, and most favored educational mode is collaborative and teacher-led instruction.
With modern technology, one can be quite able to be self-trained and not have to go to school. homeschooling is becoming popular in some countries such as Denmark, Sweden, Finland, and the US, etc. The provision of learning materials and resources on MOOC, and mass courses online has made it easy and comfortable to learn any aspects and disciplines. homeschooling is seen to be an economical method with which one can develop, grow, and advance intellectually with low, flexible investment and expenses in terms of finance and efforts.
However, at-school learning has its values. while studying independently at home, probably supported by technologies, or parents and siblings is not suitable for many young people because of its inhuman nature, education at schools provides a natural environment that is conducive to holistic personal growth. education has more significance and purpose rather than merely targeting abundant knowledge. learning is a social experience where interaction with peers, and teachers is essential for whole development both physically and mentally.
In short, which approach to adopt for general education can be a debate and relies on personal choice. I am among those who would certainly vote for the traditional mode of schooling, that is, conserving the long-lasting existence of academic institutes, no matter whether they are for young kids or adults.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71774193548 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22123668252 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685483870968 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1897462659 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.166666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118796790666 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037154227844 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332455203354 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632349302536 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271988277522 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.