A letter to my Idol
Dear Justin
First and foremost, I am writing this letter to you today to tell you how much you have inspired me. Your music is a huge part of my childhood. When I was a child, I wondered why you made an impression on me. I can’t wait to see what you’ll create next. All your songs touch my heart, and this makes me more motivated to go through the challenges in my life.
In addition, I have known about your news. It was marvelous when you came through tough things. It’s truly impressive how you turn difficult experiences into art, and I admire your ability to change your feelings into your music. It shows you are a genius artist. Your opinion about music makes people all over the world look up to you.
All in all, I hope you keep being yourself and bring to life more magic in music field . Come what may, I and all fans of you will make an effort to support you at heart.
My boy,
Nguyễn Nhật Huy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Justin First and foremost, I am writing this le...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
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Dear Justin First and foremost, I am writing this letter to you today to ...
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...ic is a huge part of my childhood. When I was a child, I wondered why you made an...
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...rt of my childhood. When I was a child, I wondered why you made an impression on ...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
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...dered why you made an impression on me. I can’t wait to see what you’ll create ne...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...e challenges in my life. In addition, I have known about your news. It was marv...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...urn difficult experiences into art, and I admire your ability to change your feel...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o change your feelings into your music. It shows you are a genius artist. Your opi...
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...the world look up to you. All in all, I hope you keep being yourself and bring ...
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Suggestion: .
... bring to life more magic in music field . Come what may, I and all fans of you wi...
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...e magic in music field . Come what may, I and all fans of you will make an effort...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ffort to support you at heart. My boy, Nguyễn Nhật Huy
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...ou at heart. My boy, Nguyễn Nhật Huy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16219125489 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651428571429 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8955395594 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.6153846154 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4615384615 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0906291477819 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039433621474 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625874230653 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0382452763679 0.12726935374 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662427618186 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.27 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.