The rise of online shopping has resulted in the decline of traditional retail stores Do you think this is a positive or negative development

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...of impact on traditional retail stores. I believe that this is positive developme...
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Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
...le can shop the goods at every time and every where without move out thier home, this is us...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'widened'.
Suggestion: widened
...than them so its many customers. It has widen range of goods so customers have a sele...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[5]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'there are no costs'?
Suggestion: there are no costs
...s have a selection of its. Beside that, there are no cost for building a store or hiring employee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85416666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41951610032 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5673808379 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260971459342 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111327093335 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748687993282 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162980309977 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10197324182 0.056905535591 179% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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