A letter to my idol

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
Dear Justin First and foremost, I am writing this letter to you today to ...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ic is a huge part of my childhood. When I was a child, I wonder why you make an i...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...rt of my childhood. When I was a child, I wonder why you make an impression on me...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...onder why you make an impression on me, I can’t wait to see what you’ll create ne...
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Line 2, column 283, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'touched'.
Suggestion: touched
...ate next. All your songs are completely touch my heart, this makes me have more motiv...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...he challenges in my life. Beside that, I have currently known about your news, i...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...turn difficult experiences into art and I admire your ability to change your feel...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... the world look up to you. All in all, I hope you keep being yourself and bring ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... bring to life more magic in music field . Come what may, I and all fans of you wi...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...e magic in music field . Come what may, I and all fans of you will make an effort...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 5.60731707317 731% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30167597765 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18722440945 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648044692737 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 1.53170731707 849% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.192266832 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5555555556 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0887047723904 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481983223304 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683412002968 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0493224611971 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697524935546 0.0819641961636 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.