You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Across the globe, scientific innovations and discoveries has paved way to improvements of various aspects of life. Such a reality might strike a general notion that the key aim of science is its benefits and improvements to human lives, with which I strongly advocate. The essay below will give reasons for the author’s personal viewpoint, providing any relevant examples from personal knowledge or experience.
To begin with, the act of undertaking scientific findings and experiments mostly roots from its practicality in real life, and a major feature only humans can conduct. Whereas other animals cannot possess a sense of scientific innovation, humans have undergone an extended process of harsh labour, which would stimulate the introduction of any supporting tools and methods to the boost of work productivity. For example, the creation of wheels from the prehistoric era shorten the time allocated to transport. This means from the dawn of the history, people have searched for alternatives for the previous working methods, thus science can assure itself as the key answer to the issue of better alternation.
Besides, many scientific achievements disoriented from the aim of life improvement can turn out to be detrimental, even fatal to life security. This is because without caution usage guidelines, general consumers, or even creators themselves, might misunderstand features within a particular scientific products, therefore depending on the functions that later can be proved to have severe side effects. Take the instance of the early 20th century, in which numerous Western citizen add sufficient amounts of radium into a wide range of daily products. Only throughout an extensive legal battle, fatal effects within the chemical was discovered, which struck an immediate abolishment of radioactive substances in most products of daily use. The given example clearly supports the idea that scientific findings must be properly handled and targeted for realistic benefits.
In conclusion, given the two reasons above, it is proved that science should be primary aimed for improving human lives with full intellectual recognition. In the future, as human intellectual levels are increased, science will be accurately directed to its mentioned major purpose as beneficial aspects of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56090651558 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97198328352 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628895184136 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.5393575266 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.214285714 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162720674933 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550210193142 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052632998976 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105298314402 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354247101061 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.65 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.