It is true that cities are transforming in various aspects, one of them is shopping patterns. It is suggested that traditional business have to be replaced from the mega shopping center. I believe that mega shopping mall offers city resides different experience of shopping and government can collect ample of taxes; therefore, I do support the given statement.
To begin with, big mall brings different shopping experience under one roof. People in the city have less time to spend in the shopping, so this kind of shopping mall helps to utilize their time by having several shops in the same building. Further, such center has various entertainment such as cinema hall, food court, children playing, by which people can enjoy shopping time. Moreover, children can enjoy the playing equipment. But all those facilities under the same building cannot afford by small business.
In addition, benefits can be for government, by this I mean they can collect heaps of taxes from big malls. In some countries like Australia government gives the discount in tax for small business to grow, which consequences can be dire in future as financial overturn cannot justify with those discounts, but in case of the big mall, the government does not think about forgiving taxes. Thus, small business does not have the national level advantage it benefits local circle of people.
To sum up, having different experiences in shopping and collecting ample of taxes are major benefits from big business; hence, I agree on replacing traditional business by global business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, i mean, in addition, kind of, such as, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18577075099 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66892385736 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577075098814 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.885765076 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.25397266985 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171084744265 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643072627967 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381065751192 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102305250023 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296110183356 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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