Shopping online has increased recently. What are the effects o this trend on the environment and what type of jobs does it create?
Nowadays, people tend to rely on online shopping rather than conventional shopping, Due to simplicity, immediate action and other factors, consumer find it easier to purchase products. Therefore, entrepreneurs are likely to compete in online shopping branches by hiring IT engineers to design website, and a delivery men to operate a home-delivery service. Looked at from a overspread tendency towards online shopping it helps us to save our valuable time for our essential works.
With the help of online hopping the more and more places of employment having been invented, therefore, improvement in wages of citizens will lead to decent financial condition. To sale products through internet, online shopping markets have to employ who specialized with computers and software programs. Therefore, it is inevitable evidence that IT engineering major is in high demand. In addition, in order to attract more customers, company should offer not just immediate but also satisfying service. Thus, for people who have not attained tertiary education, working as a delivery man is the wise choice. They should give customers a high satisfaction, and set a ambition to order their goods again. Moreover, online shopping conquers a vital role in creating new job positions.
Every action has a consequences that contributed to the society. The most efficient outcome of online shopping is the time saving. There is not a person who does not want to do shopping, because it can relieve stress and change us from outside if we buy vogue clothes. However, they spend their time on valuable things work or a study. Hence, lack of time make them consider shopping as a cumbersome thing that have to walk around a big mall. Nonetheless, invention of online shopping was a breakthrough and solved all of this problems, and with just one click we can purchase what we want in spite of time, and location.
By way of conclusion, as a consequence of online shopping we can deal with many problems in terms of shopping. In addition, it creates job positions, which are beneficial for society.
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: a consequence; consequences
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13864306785 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88535857696 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601769911504 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0941792518 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7777777778 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185814972626 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535341285027 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539619447148 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110366943718 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178316976994 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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