Considering technological advances in various fields, especially during the twenty-first century, and the shift toward the faster lifestyle have necessitated people to change their habits and attempt to work at a faster rate in comparison to the past. In other words, today, time has become a precious resource for humans.
The first reason why people should prioritize speed to accuracy is that today monopoly is diminished, at least in a large body of industry, and companies compete with each other to gain customers attention and their preferences to motivate them to buy their products or services. This competition, derived as a result of the new condition, has mainly affected the policies and perspectives of each company and induced them to work as fast as possible. Similar to the humans and machinery, time is one of the main assets and resources of each company. Time usage has a great effect on production costs, products’ price, and finally on the company’s total profit. Indeed, in order to be able to compete with each other, it is essential for companies to use time properly. For example, one-second increase in the production time of a product not only increases the production cost but also decreases the total profit.
In addition, several errors caused due to the carelessness, which is caused by doing a work quickly, can ruin the reputation of the company. Consider Toyota, a Japanese car-making factory, as an example. Some of the cars produced by Toyota in 2012 had a trivial deficiency in their gear systems which forced Toyota to call back all of the defective cars. This process incurred a lot of cost to Toyota and reduced its profit by about 5 percent. It also reduced customers’ demand for a short time after the call-back.
On the other hand, in some industries such as medical equipment production and medicine production, a mistake may cause great losses, including injuries or death. Thus, although time should be considered as an important factor, accuracy is the most significant factor in these industries. Considering the empirical studies conducted in these kinds of industries, the more the level of accuracy, the fewer the number of mistakes.
In conclusion, I strongly assert that it is more important to work accurately with lower speed than with higher speed since the latter may impose indispensable effects on both the companies and the public.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 205, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...nese car-making factory, as an example. Some of the cars produced by Toyota in 2012 had a t...
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Line 4, column 329, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ystems which forced Toyota to call back all of the defective cars. This process incurred a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, thus, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1421319797 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92023358285 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573604060914 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7557845198 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.176470588 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1764705882 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41176470588 5.45110844103 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119444274343 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361490757344 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336670548393 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675893334944 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316058890475 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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