The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
The given table indicates the proportion of the money spent on different types of consumption in five countries in 2002 .
As we can see the table , in turkey , approximately 32 percent of people’s budget went for food,drinks and smoking . Similarly , people who live in ıreland spent rougly 29 percent for that . However, people living in spain,ıtaly,sweden spent money under 19 percent .
On the other hand , italian ciztizens spent money on clothing and footwear , the percentage of 9 , while other countries spent money on these, the proportion of between 5 to 7 . People were the fewest inportant on education and leisure activity. Spanish people spent money for these , the percentageof 1.98, while turkısh people spent money 4.35 percent.
To sum up , food, drinks and tobacco held the highest percentage of consumer expendıture and the numbers are all higher than 15 , whereas the proportion in the leisure and education are all below 5 percent in the five countries .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, whereas, while, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25641025641 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05714304434 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.802550838 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123353147616 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613877945 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101158328144 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115398828367 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119662868786 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.