Thanks to modern way in building, nowadays, most people in big cities live in enormous buildings with a lot of small flats in residential area. While many people believe that accommodating on this building block has many disadvantages but I believe that in most situations benefits of that outweigh drawbacks.
On the one hand, dwelling in apartments has some negative aspects. Firstly, by living in apartment you should obey form apartment rules and you could not do any things you want. For example, in some build you could not turn on your washing machines after a certain time in midnight. Secondly, in the most skyscraper, with highly likelihood, a lot of noisy neighborhood exists that they disturb and harass your calm and peace with their deafening noise like loud music, dag barking and so on. Finally, in residence complexes, in most cases you could find some especial crime like drug trafficking, domestic violence. It is not whole story of them.
On the other hand, residing in modern small flat has some beneficial achievement. With buildings are equipped with advanced guarding system like intelligent camera, new fire detector and the others, you surly could live a safer place. In the same way, there is lot people live around you and you could have a high level communication with others and make a good friends. Maybe the most benefits of this living quarter is that they are less expensive than houses and you do not need to take out a mortgage to buy your own home.
To sum up, living in new super tall building has its own especial problem and profits. Maybe it seems hard to living on them but I believe that as a whole living there is beneficial.
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- In many cities, many people are living in large apartment blocks. Does this accommodation have more advantages or disadvantages? 73
- Advances in technology and automation have reduced the need for manual labour.Therefore working hours should be reduced.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live a new country To what extent do you agree or disagree 82
- Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams, e.g. football. However, some people think it is more beneficial to play individual sports, e.g. tennis and swimming. Discuss both view and give your opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...o modern way in building, nowadays, the most of people in big cities live in enormous building...
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Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...ost skyscraper, with highly likelihood, a lots of noisy neighborhood exists that they ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
... especial problem and profits. Maybe it seem hard to living on them but I believe th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in most cases, to sum up, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77815699659 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57428850219 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576791808874 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8910813378 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158909176692 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054609535154 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704965423089 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109560038099 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718852264981 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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