Some believe that being involved in the arts make people feeling better. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Art is a knowledge in parallel with other knowledge such as sciences and mathematics. Thus, art is tightly related with emotions and aesthetic senses. Despite the past era when arts was included by a very special groups, nowadays the majority of people have put arts in the context of their lives. Some say being involved in arts has a positive impact on people’s feelings. Indeed art can make one feel relax and peaceful.
Nowadays life styles have changed into having more rush, anxiety and struggle. Consequently, people are likely to be more nervous. This has been generated the urgent of ori...
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Don't think essays
Don't think essays philosophically. Take it simple.
This is the tip: You can almost apply following reasons to any essays when there are no reasons coming up:
reason 1: save time
reason 2: same money
reason 3: get more info
reason 4: make friends
for example, for this essay:
'being involved in the arts' can save time.
'being involved in the arts' can same money.
'being involved in the arts' can make friends.
Let us know if you didn't get the points.
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I think the inro para is not developed enough, in fact i couldn't come up with anything els my mind just wen blank! since i couldn't find any similar essay to this topic, could you possibly give me some clue how to start it or how to develop it please?
tnx :)