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many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment.why is this happening and what measures can be tackle this problem.
It is said that that when a man is denied the right to live the life he belives in, he has no choice but to become an outlaw . Thus,crime is increasing in the prodigious society .There must be some reasons behind this surging of crimes .However,it is pondered that offenders commit ore crimes after serving the first punishment .Below light will be shed upon its reasons and solution for the problem .
First of all,the main reason can be the "Need for money".After getting the first punishment ,offenders becomes against the authorities because during the punishment they have to face their harsh ...
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Sentence: It is said that that when a man is denied the right to live the life he belives in, he has no choice but to become an outlaw.
Description: The fragment that that contains a repeated word
Sentence: And the another reason is the Bad company.
Description: The token the is not usually followed by a determiner/pronoun, singular
Suggestion: Refer to the and another
Sentence: It is said that that when a man is denied the right to live the life he belives in, he has no choice but to become an outlaw.
Error: belives Suggestion: believes
Sentence: Further, knowing solutions of the above goven problem is even holding more priority.
Error: goven Suggestion: govern
Sentence: And the second soultion is Probation.
Error: soultion Suggestion: solution
Sentence: Probation is a good way to reduce prison overcrowding, but it must only used for those who have commited minor crimes.
Error: commited Suggestion: committed
Sentence: It is important to rehabilate criminals while their are in prison otherwise they may re-offend when they release.
Error: rehabilate Suggestion: rehabilitate
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.274 0.35
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.027 0.07
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Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 291 350
No. of Characters: 1390 1500
No. of Different Words: 168 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.13 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.777 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.427 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.009 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.274 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.47 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.027 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5