You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
» explain why you were at the restaurant
» describe the problems
» write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I visited your restaurant on 14th of this month, along with my family and was highly disappointed with the food served to us.
We were there to celebrate and enjoy my parents 50th anniversary. As it was a special occassion, we had invited our relatives and family friend's to join us. It was a mix of all age group's from kids to senior citizens. Your restaurant had amazing reviews on your website by customers. Hence, we decided to conduct our function at your restaurant.
To begin with, most of the main course curries served were spicy and over cooked. In addition, the cake we ordered was stale. Due to which two of our guest got stomach infection and had to be admitted in the hospital for a day. We were disappointed and heart broken because it was a special evening for our family and it was spoiled because of the meal served to us.
I want a return apology from your management as well as the chef and reimburse the amount that was charged. I am attaching the receipt along with this letter.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Sam Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, well, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61734693878 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49177635354 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59693877551 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5537104467 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6428571429 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211256488077 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731295931387 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502234633748 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117050648551 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028706115378 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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