Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
– explain why you changed jobs
– describe your new job
– tell him/her your other news
Dear Keith,
Hope your are doing well. Sorry for not writing earlier.
I am writing to inform you about new developments in my personal and professional life.
As you know I stay in suburbs and my previous job was on the southern tip of the city. Commuting on daily basis was getting really difficult due to traffic and metro construction on the route. As a result, I took the decision of taking up a new job in the suburbs, nearby my residence.
I joined sunshine pharma, from the 1st of this month as senior sales executive. I am the head of sales for the cities west zone and have been assigned the duty to supervise the work of 10 subordinates. I report directly to the VP of sales. The job satisfaction is optimum, unlike my previous job.
As i am saving up on the eneregy and time spent on commuting, I have been utilizing it to spend quality time with family and even some me time in the gym. Moreover, I have bought a new car, a shiny black sedan. I would like to take you for a ride, as per your availablity. Though, I would prefer to go for a spin on a weekends.
Looking forward to your reply and meeting you soon.
Best regards,
Sami
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 203, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... supervise the work of 10 subordinates. I report directly to the VP of sales. The...
^
Line 11, column 4, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... optimum, unlike my previous job. As i am saving up on the eneregy and time sp...
^
Line 15, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y and meeting you soon. Best regards, Sami
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, really, so, well, even so, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39631336406 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56218711655 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599078341014 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6374075242 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.625 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5625 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18029520152 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556534714534 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573059935517 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100540019026 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369918264332 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.