You should spend about 20 minutes on this Task.
The first graph below shows the weight (in tonnes) of fruit produced by a farm during each month in
2013, and also the amount (in tonnes) of fertiliser used. The second graph shows the volume of
rainfall in each month (in millimetres.)
Write a report summarising the information. Select and describe the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
The charts give information regarding the tonnage of fruit produced in a farm per month in
2013, the fertiliser used and the monthly rainfall in that year.
We can see that fruit production rose steadily from just over 2 tonnes in January to a peak of
roughly 4.2 tonnes by August. Output then fell rapidly, declining to around the initial 2 tonne mark in
December. However, looking at fertiliser use, we see that this seasonal pattern is largely reversed:
the most fertiliser (just under 1 tonne) was utilised in April, followed by a marked decline to zero in
June and July. Fertiliser consumption then increased slightly in the autumn, rising to a total of around
0.7 tonnes before dipping to just below 0.5 tonnes at year end.
Regarding rainfall, this appears to reflect the use of fertiliser, with an early high of 16mm in
February, falling consistently to 4mm in July, August and September. Rainfall then increased steadily
to reach 14mm in December.
In summary, this farm generally employed the most fertiliser at seasons of high rainfall, and by
contrast it produced the most fruit when both rainfall and fertiliser use were around their lowest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, regarding, so, then, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03076923077 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64085137588 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4495549515 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.625 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 3.83414634146 339% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175156173029 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778247499852 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457106310919 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637244071381 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415107816204 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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