Your friend from an English speaking country will come to your city for a holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter you should:
- Invite him to stay with you.
- Introduce some places to visit
- Give him some advice
Dear Mohan,
I am glad that you are coming to Hyderabad in coming January. I am very excited to meet you in person, as we are going to meet after very long time, almost 6 years I guess.
In the mail, you have mentioned to arrange the accommodation for you during the visit. As I am staying alone, I would like to invite you to stay with me. This will give us lot of time to recollect the actions we did in our college days.
As you are visiting Hyderabad for the first time, I would like to suggest some tourist attractions around and in the City. The name Hyderabad simply strikes the following attractions. Firstly, Tank bund, which has Buddha statue located in the centre of Hussain sagar. We can do the boating in the Hussain sagar and we can watch Laser show, which is beautiful attraction resided by the lake.
Secondly, Golconda Fort, which is the living place of Nizam’s during their tenure. Other attractions like, Charminar, Hitec city, Birla Temple, Ramoji Film City, Wonderla and many amusement parks are there.
Don’t forget to bring some clothes, as the weather will get colder in January. Also, don’t forget to bring your camera. Please share your itinerary, so that I would like to pick you up from the airport.
See you soon,
Suresh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 392, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...autiful attraction resided by the lake. Secondly, Golconda Fort, which is the li...
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Line 13, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u up from the airport. See you soon, Suresh
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74553571429 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42820621597 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616071428571 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6030594118 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8666666667 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9333333333 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208081209017 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670904781522 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056705558668 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100494691653 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669497280612 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.