Some people think governments should take measures to improve the health of its citizens. Others think it must be managed by individuals. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In today's world, some think that health of the general public is the liability of the government. However, few of them also deem that the individual is held accountable for their own sound health. In my view, even though government can do propaganda or impose laws to create awareness on leading a healthy life, end of the day, it narrows down to the hands of individuals.
The government can create and impose laws to make its own people realize the importance of leading a healthy life. Firstly, it can impose a ban on the factors that are detrimental to the health of the public. For an instance, imposing a serious ban on drugs, alcohol and cigarettes will have a sound impact on the society. Secondly, tightening the quality standards for the food production and imposing inflated taxes on the junk food with the objective of preventing its consumption may produce positive results. Lastly, conducting more vaccination camps to prevent many diseases also will reap positive impact on the people. Despite the fact that, vaccines are safe and effective, some group of people restrain themselves from vaccination camps. Hence making it as the mandatory law comes is again a responsibility of the government.
In spite of the government measures to keep its nationals hale and healthy, it boils down to the lifestyle of each and every individual. It is not possible for the governing body to watch with an eagle eye on the lifestyle of an individual. People should be held responsible for their eating habits, leading an active lifestyle and restraining themselves from the consumption of drugs, alcohol and cigarettes. If they are reluctant in giving away from harmful practices, then there is a remote chance for the government to build a healthy society.
In a nutshell, there are lots of things government can do to create positive changes in the health of the individuals. However, it’s in the hands of individuals to keep themselves hale and healthy. The public should have the willingness to give away unhealthy habits and opt for healthy activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ys world, some think that health of the general public is the liability of the government. How...
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Line 3, column 749, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...rain themselves from vaccination camps. Hence making it as the mandatory law comes is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03197674419 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85857229632 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505813953488 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5007799549 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.823529412 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155390484873 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494829649895 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418385693074 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986609795057 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204616962319 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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