Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion
The travel from one place to another it is law of life. Many persons spend there whole life on place. I think it quite boring to stay on place. So, i think every persons have to travel many places on their whole life. Which is help him to learn and gain new things and improve life style.
To, enjoy life change is vital thing. The change one place to another we get new people, new food, and new community. To meet new peoples we learned lot of thing from them. Such as new language, new food that help to improve knowledge. In india there are many state and language. So it obvious to move from one state to another that help many peoples to learn fresh things. which help him to gain knowledge.
Many people’s wants higher salary from their job. So people switch their job from one company to another company. To, switching job form one country to another which help him to hike salary as well as to see new places. For example mahesh is software engineer due this position he have travel from one country to another country. So due to travel from one place to another he learn all over languages in world and various type of savory dishes. Due to change his job and traving which is help him to improve there life style.
The climate and community is important factor in life. In world there are different type of community such as hindu, muslims, catholic etc. Due to community which we like we have to live near by that community. or many people like to live different type of community. For example Sachin like to lives different type of community because of his nature manage to live different type of community. Now he has all type knowledge of different community.
But, every coin has tow sides. Due change from one place to another lot of disadvantage also. Such as language and climate problem. Due to change place we have to search new school and college to children’s. It might cause we have wait for education year starts.
So, finally all consider we say that change from one place to another we get lot of things. Which is help us to improve life style as well as knowledge. So i always prefer to travel one place to another.
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Sentence: Which is help him to learn and gain new things and improve life style.
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Sentence: So it obvious to move from one state to another that help many peoples to learn fresh things. which help him to gain knowledge.
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Sentence: To, switching job form one country to another which help him to hike salary as well as to see new places.
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Sentence: So due to travel from one place to another he learn all over languages in world and various type of savory dishes.
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Sentence: Due to change his job and traving which is help him to improve there life style.
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Sentence: For example Sachin like to lives different type of community because of his nature manage to live different type of community.
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Sentence: Which is help us to improve life style as well as knowledge.
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Suggestion: Refer to is and help
Sentence: Due to change his job and traving which is help him to improve there life style.
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Avg. Sentence Length: 14.036 21.0
No. of Different Words: 148 200
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Score: 16 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 28 15
No. of Words: 393 350
No. of Characters: 1705 1500
No. of Different Words: 148 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.452 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.338 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.097 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 105 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 69 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.036 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.058 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.332 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.546 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.245 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5