The diagram illustrates the various processes for manufacturing black tea. There are two methods: Traditional and modern. Every method have five main stages: from picking fresh tea leaves stage to black tea is released.
In the first stage of process, people only choose buds and two top fresh tea leaves to pick, which make sure for good quality tea. Then, leaves are put on rack and under effect of air, moisture of teas leaves will declined 40%. In the third stage, which is called oxidation, if using traditional method, leaves are rolled flat and broken, enzymes of tea leaves are released. If choosing modern method, leaves will cut, torn and curled, which make leaves become smaller granular pieces. Modern technique seem quicker than traditional technique.
Next, leaves are rolled and spread on titles or cement. This stage, combination between enzymes and air will make leaves change to copper color. In the drying stage, leaves will put into oven or hot air dryers and 97% in moisture total out. The final, fresh tea leaves become black tea with feature flavour and aroma are released.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 214, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'decline'
Suggestion: decline
...ct of air, moisture of teas leaves will declined 40%. In the third stage, which is calle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01639344262 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21883494717 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5135201849 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154856663628 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756247793953 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092042690447 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142994219153 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940991422051 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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