Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports give some suggestions on how to deal with dangerous.
Sports play an important role in our life. It help to keep our body active, alert and healthy. Nowadays, there are so many dangerous games such as boxing, high speed racing and mountain climbing but even these sports are quite popular among people.There are numerous reasons why people like it and how to handle it safely?
first and foremost reason is that, sometimes people love to do adventures and thriller activities so they take part in such types of games. Furthermore, some people are very ambitious and they like to accept challenges in their life. For instance, Marry com is an Indian boxer and she injured so many time during the game but she always ready to take challenges. In addition to it, People prefer to participate in some fighting games because they gain some skills how to defined themselves.
Moreover, mostly people think that more profit. They take part in more risky games which help them to solve the Montery problem.Last but not the least, Dangerous games give easily publicity to persons. They gain name and fame in short time after take part in dangerous games.
There are some suggestions to deal with these games. Firstly professional training should be provided to people by trainer that help them to reduce the risk Secondly, Government also implement some rule and regulation regarding to support and safety. Apart from that, awareness of dangerous also help to people handle it easily.
To put it in a nutshell, a pen down saying that games provide us enjoyment and help us to forget all our worries and anxieties but we should take proper training before participating in dangerous games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, apart from, for instance, in addition, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95636363636 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5031972943 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585454545455 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2848679697 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3571428571 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368955245861 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116707605288 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636858471296 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175662037638 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637792078958 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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