These days free music and free films are available online. Is this is positive or a negative development, Give reason for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
We live in a disposable, "cast-off and throw away" society that has largely lost any real sense of permanance; Nothing is absolute. There are some issues which remains irreuocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that nowadays, cost-free music as well as movies are available on internet source. Whether it shows positive or negative change in the development of nation? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic with illustration and examples and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there are group of people who reckon that availability of music and films on internet without paying anything is a positive change. They strengthen their view point by claiming that if all these facilities were available free of cost then, everyone will be able to utilize it for various purposes such as listening music during leisure time as well as watching movies. As a result, will be able to relax their mind which ultimately provide great assistance to them to get rid out of the problem mainly 'hypertansion.' secondly, if all these facilities available without paying even a single penny. Consequently, it will be highly benefical for every group of people whether they belong to middle class or high status family which teaches us a lesson of equality which ultimately relates to the development of nation.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group who argue that there are plethora of drawbacks of free music and films. Primary one is that if it is available online without any charge then about 65 percent individuals were busy to listen music and watching movies without doing any other household practices. As a result, develop bad habits like laziness, loss of practical skills would be the perfect epitome. Moreover, people utilize online resources for longer periods to watch movies and listening music which cause serious illness regarding health. The best epitome of this is colourblindness (loss of vision). However, spending much time to watch films and listening songs leads to wastage of time. We know that 'Time and tides waits for none' so, they wastage their precious time to watching and listening songs just because of free availability of them.
To crown it all, I pen down saying that "Every garden has weeds." There are voluminous answers to this question. On balance however, I tend to believe that nodoubt, online music as well as movies which were available free of cost in this modern era has plethora of advantages in the development of nation as the people uses it as a relaxation technique to become a stress free society. But, also has some negative aspects as youth spend their precious time to watching movies and listening songs without doing any work which is the main obstacle in the development of country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: groups
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Suggestion: Secondly
...out of the problem mainly hypertansion. secondly, if all these facilities available with...
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Suggestion:
...y work which is the main obstacle in the development of country.
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Suggestion:
...stacle in the development of country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2360.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 469.0 315.596192385 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03198294243 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66662139311 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520255863539 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 749.7 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1169314913 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.45 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191835735349 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602515882623 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481964500624 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125074137587 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00792849675674 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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