some people believe that the internet is a wonderful tool for making new friends and maintaining existing friendships. others however, think that socialising online removes the face-to-face contact so vital to human relationships.
In the technologically developing world internet and modern devices are playing a vital role in connecting each other. While few people believe that internet is a very good way to develop relationship by making new friends and maintain it. Other think that it affects on people's face-to-face contact.
on one hand, it is fact that majority of people use internet for various purpose. Nowadays internet is used by every individual to connect each other from far away. secondly, internet has many ways to communicate from one person to another. A person can make his relationship strong through video calls which he can see other person present condition. Internet can use for official to contact other institute by sending mail,voice message, fax and etc. Nowadays, many students and youngsters study in other country although they make new friends and develop their friendship without visiting or meeting in person to another country person. for instance: I have a friend from the UK her name Elizabeth our friendship started through facebook and it made us as a best friends.
ON the other hand, nowadays people do not think meeting face-to-face is important, but it is very essential to develop a strong and long time friendship. Previously people used to visit each other to invite for special events as like on birthday party, festival time etc. But now people just send a wishing message through internet and this is the reason where people's emotional feelings and affection about each other are day by day reducing. nowadays relative get together on emergency situation or if someone passed away.
in conclusion, internet has a useful task as well as some negative affects on people's live and activity. As per my opinion, internet can use but only on necessary situation, people should maintain their friendship through internet with developing the interpersonal relationship by visiting on special occasion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18709677419 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77039499883 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.726555756 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283995768089 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104552685149 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843005760797 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196376936387 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930710379635 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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