Many people believe that social networking sites have had had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
Social networking platforms on internet such as Facebook, are thought to have detrimental impacts on strata as well as society. I completely agree with this notion and as the drawbacks of such types of internet sites dominate their benefits which are explained in below mentioned paragraphs.
In the present era of technological developments, myriad innovations can be witnessed and internet is one of them, of course. A plethora of social networking websites, for instance twitter, Facebook are utilized by people out-and-out in order to make new friends and find the existing; perhaps could be a herculean task to locate, otherwise. Moreover, such websites are a significance source of news and entertainment. Majority of students find it a commendable source of education in the form of online classes as well as study material.
On the contrary, people using such online websites are often being cheated by the fake identities of other users. For instance, anti-social masses or miscreants create unreal accounts and attract innocent people into their trap; becomes a herculean task to get out of that, thereafter. Apart from this, huge amount of illicit and objectionable content is uploaded by these websites which might not be fruitful for the society. For example, videos and clips of terrorist training classes could be witnessed on internet, thereby pushing youth into such delinquent acts.
In conclusion, although these networking platforms were launched with due intention of social interaction amid people of variant communities and cultures in every nook and corner of the earth, yet irrelevant utilization does have been mushrooming in society besides copious harmful effects like drug trafficking, robbery, murders and many more are the outcomes affecting community and people, undoubtedly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49103942652 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97148397054 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637992831541 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.7392647616 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.272727273 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136104012782 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469539994802 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503252056294 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838055903347 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393972462441 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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