Television plays a vital role in this modern life. This is not a new phenomenon. But this trend has gained momentum in now a days thanks to horizons of technology. Some people think television is the medium to spread all the news to people easily, whereas on the other hand some people think television can cause some effects. However, there are some advantages and disadvantages which I will discuss now through out this essay.
To begin with, there are several advantages by watching television. Firstly, television can gives so much information about news which are going all over the world. According to my own experience when I was a university student I performed a research which discovers television is the cheap source to spread all the news and to create a public awareness in the society.
Secondly, it teaches you about different cultures, ideas, and how to interact with different people. Finally, it is cheap source of entertainment also.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages firstly, it is medium to spread some crime and violence frequently. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that fake news are spreading in television now a days. Moreover, it causes mental disturb those who are addicted to it. Lastly, it can create negative inspiration in the kids.
Therefore on the basis of all the points discussed till now and going by my personal experience as well, I would like to state in conclusion that, since the positives outnumber and outweighs the negatives and also since these negatives can easily be redressed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08270676692 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85209288575 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56015037594 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.002652273 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1333333333 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.25397266985 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220655654326 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664316373582 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575561772898 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104031478465 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732366392478 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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