Parents responsibility on children's behavior plays a vital role in children's life in these days. Some people think parents are not responsible to kids mistakes because it depends on their individuals but some parents think that they are responsible for their younger one's mistakes. However, I strongly agree that parents are for their children's mistakes.
To begin with, there are several advantages if parents might take their responsibility of their children firstly, they study well and will settle better in their life. Secondly, they learn how to respect elders and how to treat different age group people in the society. This might help both parents and children's to get good name in the society.
On the other hand, there are some potential drawbacks involved in behavior of children if parents didn't take responsibility. The most dreaded danger involved in this is they might addict to alcoholic beverages, smoking, and drugs which are harmful to their body. Moreover, children will face several problems if parents are not responsible to them. Now-a-days many children's are involving in cyber crimes and harassing women's cases which may lead to danger in their life's.
Therefore, on the basis of all the points discussed till now and going by my personal opinion I will state in conclusion that parents are responsible for behavior of children which is useful to children's future to settle at higher positions in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20600858369 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68443185109 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540772532189 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6243509608 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.272727273 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2727272727 7.25397266985 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29410814222 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135206410904 0.0925447433944 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922707285559 0.071462118173 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196511635658 0.151781067708 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828450535709 0.0609392437508 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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