It is argued that the individual's culture and personality could be guessed from the way of selecting clothes. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that there are inaccurate estimation about person's private life from only observing the diverse types of clothing.
To embark upon, I believe that this would not to be a proper method to verdict someone solely from inadequate information. The person might come from various cultures and backgrounds who would like to wear a cloth which may not be a traditional for that country. Indeed, anybody have the right to select the cloth they are willing to wear and it would be a wrong approach to reckon on their character merely by their choice of clothing. For example, Bill Gates, the founder of Microsoft wears a casual jeans and shirts. In addition, with paying attention to his style, you probably consider him as a poor and untidy person at the first glance but after digging into his personality, you eventually realize that nothing could be conceived about him.
Furthermore, it is true that predicting a person's culture is not a reasonable method to rely on with. In anywhere around the globe there would be a variety of clothes which could be decided whether to wear them or not. Moreover, wearing differently from the tradition is personal and that should not affect the other's opinion. Also, putting on distinct clothes may cause misinterpreting about their personality.
To recapitulate, I strongly believe that the estimation of personality and culture should not be taken seriously because that would not be accurate as to know the person directly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
It is argued that the individuals culture and personality could be guesse...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...personal and that should not affect the others opinion. Also, putting on distinct clot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, as to, for example, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05204460967 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75518108089 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579925650558 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2499178171 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199442586804 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773874758405 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455245404544 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131739322591 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417061439575 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.