Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that teachers in the past were more regarded by the society that today. Now, mostly appreciate them just in some symbolic ceremonies. Contrary to this popular beliefs there are still those who argue that always teacher vocation has the highest level of impact among all of the jobs. I, to a great extent, agree with this idea that teachers were more valued by people in the past than today.
First and foremost, in the past, the number of educated people was very few and not comparable with today. In the family, just some of the children can complete the high school degree, so if some of them could to go to the college and became a teacher, so it is very important merit for them. For example, My grandmother was a teacher and she says that when she started teaching at the school, all of her family and her friend try to get advice from her on their high important issues.
On another significant fact, that should be taken into the consideration is that in past the there was limited jobs in the society, most of the educated people including, doctors, poets, writers, teachers and some few another number. People who continue d their study until university had little choices for the future job. Therefore, this kind of jobs was very noticeable value in the society. But, after some decade, and appearance of the new field of study, for instance, engineering, biology, psychologist and etc. Creation of this new jobs and their significant roles in the development of the world and building new modern society. In addition, this new scientific field, producing the possibility of a lot of new jobs and services with the high salary that revolution the economy of societies. Thus, most of the young people preferred to study in this new field of study because they can have the better economic benefit through them. Consequently, the impact of old jobs such as teachers has done decreased in people mind.
Finally, yet importantly, today, teachers because of their important role in the thought of our next generation have the special value between all of the people but, because of changes in people behavior and their lifestyle and their social position, the shape of appreciate from teacher transformed.
On the basis of reasons that mentioned above, I am convinced that today, teachers getting be lower attention than past. Because of change in educational condition and people believes and their behaviors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, if, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2039.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90144230769 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56137562827 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521634615385 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3950989374 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.277777778 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165268142632 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608906239915 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840157868479 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11100204457 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875214547533 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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