In under developed countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well. Discuss.
Globetrotting is quite common nowadays, and plays a important role to develop the nations. Nowadays many people are interested to travel other places to relax. In opinion tourism gives many advantages to the underdeveloped contraries to raise their economy and increase their employment.
To begin with, these days many underdeveloped countries are developing their tourism to increase their economy. From last decade 10% of world’s GDP is only on tourism. In some developing countries, notably small island states, tourism can account for over 25% of GDP. Tourists may learn many interesting thing that special to the country like traditions, cultures food and language. Specially India is in first place to promote the tourism in traditional and culture like yoga, meditation and traditional dressing, classical music and dance, festivals and temples.
By tourism country will develop in all ways like economy will increase and many employment opportunities are available. So that, unemployment will reduces. People can get engaged with jobs, tourist guide, travel agencies, travels, hotel managements, cooking, service sector. For example, countries like Singapore and Thailand are mainly depends on tourism
In conclusion, not only the underdeveloped countries many countries are developing the tourism to expose their culture and traditionalism. Advantages overweigh the disadvantages.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 204.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87745098039 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07184805623 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622549019608 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4493418656 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2307692308 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522123642814 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521791943429 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927580130597 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327894628267 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 53.1260098522 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 11.5310837438 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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