The bar chart compares Australian men and women in various age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 by percentage.
Overall, it is reported that approximately 40 percent to 53 percent of them in all ages exercised frequently in 2010. Men did a less regularly physical activity than women except for age group of 15 to 24. Australian aged more than 64 had the exercise rate equally in both sexes while age group of 35 to 44 shows the highest gap between them.
As women getting older they tended to exercise more. From age 15 to 34, their exercise rate was about 48 - 49 percentage and the figures increased to about 53 percent in age 35 to age 64. For women who aged 65 and over had exercise rate of 47 percent which is equal to men in this age group.
Male Australians did the most exercise in age between 15 - 24 by 53 percent and the figure dropped as they got older, reported about 40 percent in their age of 35 to 44. The figure slightly increased to be same as women as mentioned in the age of 65 and over.
- In the eighteen to twenty year age bracket the percentage was as high as 70%. A large contributing factor to this high level of addiction is attributed to the uncensored TV advertising of cigarettes.For this reason all cigarette advertising should be bann 73
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 73
- Do you think that modern technology such as the internet and computers will ever replace the book or the written word as the main source of information Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience 73
- The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 84
- The charts below show the result of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reason why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34715025907 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.415411835 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528497409326 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2528589985 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2222222222 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386498815805 0.215688989381 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196332470793 0.103423049105 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.183977166471 0.0843802449381 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316877005495 0.15604864568 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.203993556451 0.0819641961636 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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