The bar chart shows the typical weekday for students in three different countries
The bar chart depicts the amount of hours spent sleeping, studying and relaxing by students in the UK, Japan and Germany. At first glance, it is evident that Japanese children spend the large amount of hours on studying.
It can be seen from the chart that despite a few minor differences, the UK and Germany have similar statistics. UK students spend the most time on sleeping with 8.5 hours and the figure for Germany are 8 hours. The average hours which German children spend on studying are 9 hours a day, which are higher than in the UK. Both the UK and Germany share an equal 7 hours a day on relaxing.
However, Japanese schoolchildren focus much more on studying, at 13 hours a day. Whereas, they spend 8 hours on sleeping and only have 4 hours to relax.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 634.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56115107914 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45925336757 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 182.7 283.868780488 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.8729303501 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.25 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0711568305953 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374531801706 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554629938078 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0527758204309 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413745508603 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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