Not everybody is born star with talents like sports or music. Some people believe that children can excel in such talents by being coached by an instructor. Although having a good teacher can shape the skills, being god gifted adds a cherry on the cake.
To start with, many talented artists have been successful but not all leave a mark by the work they do in their respective fields. To be consistent and stay in the hearts of the masses, one must be extraordinarily talented. It is this talent that takes someone to the zenith, while others observe from the nadir. For instance, a very famous cricketer known for his immaculate and aggressive batting skills, Mr. Sachin Tendulkar, had the knack of becoming a batsman since his childhood. His natural ability to quickly grasp the nuances of batting won him several accolades. As a result, he became the best batsmen that the world has ever seen. Many famous cricketers and intellectuals attribute his success to the natural talent he possesses to play cricket.
However, not everyone is born talented. There are many people in this world who have attained immense success because of extreme hard work and passion put in by their mentors. For example, Dr. A.R. Rahman who initially started off his career by working as an Accountant in a Multinational never imagined reaching great heights in the music industry. His father who was also his coach gave him music lessons rigorously for a long time. Despite having a busy schedule, Rahman with the help of his tutor/father worked day in and day out to learn the intricacies of music thereby becoming the best musician India has ever produced.
To conclude, on the face of it, it seems that having a stupendous master can help anyone reach the top of their field but being gifted with talent by birth adds another dimension all together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86349206349 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55770588818 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612698412698 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9170022296 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18497135558 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608881874636 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501540153114 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115886267735 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642485637051 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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