the time people devotes in job leaves little time for personal life .how wide spraed is problem will this shortage of of time cause.
In present time, competition is reaching at peak point and everyone doing struggle for survival in life. Due to which individual spending lot of time in job and giving little time to family. This is common issue in society and I am going to discuss the reason of this problem in upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, I deem that nowadays person want to become successful and wealthy in life. This goal of person force his or her to earn more money. For example, person giving more importance to materialistic things to show his or her standard in front of society. Secondly, companies and other institutions giving high salary only for long working hours and people spend most of day in office or at work.
Furthermore, I ponder that nowadays major trend noticed among people is spending time with friends and colleagues not with family members. This thing creates disputes in family. Lastly, I want to say that person is greedy and selfish and he or she wants to spend time in productive manner so that individual can earn something even in minute.
To recapitulate, I deem that in present scenario giving time to family become difficult task but it is utmost necessary to spend time with family on weekend. This thing makes man prefect in all aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80184331797 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5499740894 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585253456221 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6286536819 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8333333333 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303153239891 0.242375264174 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103684852219 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683087986309 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18633010016 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828605612399 0.0609392437508 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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