school should organise activities after class .To what extent do you agree.
The most crucial stage of life is learning. Children spend most of time in school for study. Nowadays, school are organizing ample of activities in school after class to change the environment of school. I am completely agree with statement and going to discuss my views in upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, organizing number if activities in school divert the mind of students form monotonous routine to provide them relaxation from study. For instance, sports, dance and panting competition in school decline burden of study for at least sometime. Secondly, another striking idea in my mind is that when student participates in extra activities, it develops confidence as well as improve communication skills.
Furthermore, I ponder that student can share their feelings and experiences in group activities which enable them to develop more effective skills and come to know about their flaws in particular activities. Lastly, I assert that Grown up can choose specific sport as their profession in future and can make their future bright with a plethora of opportunities.
To conclude, I think that motivation should be necessary to boost the confidence of students and increase their participation in various activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... environment of school. I am completely agree with statement and going to discuss my ...
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Line 2, column 358, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent participates in extra activities, it develops confidence as well as improve c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, at least, for instance, i think, in particular, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 193.0 242.827586207 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40414507772 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97662869666 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652849740933 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2118888075 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.3 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.25397266985 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130517102672 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531085734767 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082516576101 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755347554179 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623151527845 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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