More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
These days, many people in rural areas tend to migrate in large metropolises where are often seen as the places of opportunities. However, the migration are becoming extremely popular, giving rise to some drawbacks for town-dwellers. In this following essay, I will dicuss several major problems associated with people living in urban areas, before suggesting possible measures.
First of all, the main problem for anyone who hopes to live in a city is that cost of living in a metropolis is more often than not much higher than it is in a village. For example, as there are a dramatic increasing in population of cities, demands for accommodation, food and services can be in short supply. Furthermore, another issue is that people living in large cities are likely to confront soaring crime rates and regular traffic congestion. In the fact that every day, city residents might virtually put up with in massive traffic jams, especially in rush hours and daily mass media always update criminal news such as shopliftings, muggings, frauds and other offenders. Besides that, air quality is also one of the most alarming problems affecting urban dwellers, particularly when a number of commuters are rising rapidly and are not able to control.
However, there are various steps government could do to tackle these problems. Firstly, a simple method to reduce the cost of living is to invest in buildings of affordable or social housing projects and construct more schools and hopitals to aid people in poverty. Secondly, government should strengthen police patrol and introduce severe laws to stamp out wrong activities. For example, for an offender committing a deliberate crime need be in jail, instead of just imposing a fine. In addition, governments should place a high priority to build cleaner public transports, which might encourage people to use them rather than private vehicles. Not only can traffice moves be curbed but also air pollution may be improved significantly.
In conclusion, I believe that although many people migrate into large cities, causing certainly several problems to city life , there are a wide range of measures governments could do to enhance life quality of residents living in a metropolis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82026567024 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6542840715 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.8 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5333333333 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270524198041 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734678318961 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497023657075 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153755001632 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374292326546 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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